The Secret to Smooth Writing
Using your words but better
How words flow so smoothly that readers can't help but keep going.
Interesting, right?
I keep wondering how some writers keep you hooked from start to finish?
Today, I'm about to let you in on a little secret, called the "bucket brigade" technique.
Don't worry, it's not as complicated as it sounds!
In writing, we use special words and short phrases to guide your attention from one paragraph to the next.
Cool, huh?
Now, you might be thinking, that sounds great, but how do I do it?
Don't worry, I've got your back!
Allow me to show you some magic words that can make your writing super smooth.
Here are some examples:
So
And
Also
Look
First
Listen
By now
You see
Truth is
Turns out
Of course
Let me explain
Think about it
Here the best part
See how simple they are?
You probably use these words all the time when you're talking to friends. That's the beauty of it - it makes your writing sound natural and chatty.
I remember when I first started writing, my paragraphs felt choppy. It was like stumbling over roots on a badly maintained trail. Not fun at all! But then I learned about the bucket brigade, and I’m grateful, what a difference it made!
Here's a quick example of how it works:
I love nature walks. They're my favorite way to relax.
So, I decided to explore a new trail near my home. I packed some snacks and water.
And you know what? The views were breathtaking!
Of course, I took way too many photos. And I realized it was worth it.
See how those little words at the start of each paragraph make it all flow together? It's amazing, right?
Now do you remember those times when you're reading something, and you just can't stop?
That's because the writer is using another trick. They're planting little seeds of curiosity at the end of each paragraph.
And before you know it, you've read the whole thing!
Here's how it might look:
I love creating Instagram Reels. They're always fun to make.
Except for that one time...
It was my friend's birthday, and I wanted to surprise her. I had a brilliant idea.
Or so I thought.
I decided to make a Reel of her funniest moments. How hard could it be?
Turns out, pretty hard.
See how each paragraph ending makes you want to read the next one?
This is the power of curiosity seeds!
Now, I know what you're thinking. This sounds great, but can I really do it?
Absolutely!
And you can follow this simple process:
Write your paragraphs as usual.
Look at the start of each paragraph. Can you add a bucket brigade word?
Check the end of each paragraph. Can you leave a little mystery?
Read it all together. Does it flow smoothly?
That's it!
You can start using this right away. In fact, why not try it on your next piece of writing? I bet you'll be surprised at how much better it sounds.
Remember, practice makes perfect. The more you use these techniques, the more natural they'll feel.
And soon, you'll be writing smooth, engaging copy without even thinking about it!
Writing can be challenging, but with tricks like these, it becomes so much more fun.
And the best part? Your readers will love it too!
Thank you for reading an stay tuned for my next email. I've got more awesome writing tips coming your way. And you won't want to miss it!
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Until next time, always enjoy writing!
Cheers,
Jenni Delos Reyes